Dancing leaves all greet the sun
Now the day has just begun.
Pigeon coos to lend support,
Finished with the insect caught.
Flowers reaching to the sky
Bending with their dew supply
Add to chorus morning came
Flaunting colours without shame.
Clouds are peeping from on high
On their perches in the sky,
Daring winds to send them on
To many places far beyond.
Cows in meadows send their call
From a distance looking small;
Barking dogs will bring them round
To the nearby milk compound.
School bus standing by the shed
Awakened from its evening bed
Will soon collect unwilling load
For school beyond this rural road.
Tractor growls to early start
With urgent lurch to do its part
While farmer squints at paddock far,
Swinging gate now wedged ajar.
Woman stirring cooking pot
Wipes her face, she’s feeling hot;
Checks to see the oven fed
Lots of wood to bake the bread.
Eldest daughter scrubbing floor
Thinks of wedding soon in store,
Hoping that her lover Jed
Will opt for city life instead.
Such is life upon the land
Everybody lends a hand,
Those who labour hard this way
Live to eat another day.
“© Copyright Ian Grice 2017 All rights reserved”
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Thanks for visiting and commenting.
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I enjoyed this Ian. a change from your stories, but a welcome one nevertheless.
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Thank you Barb, you are always so encouraging with your comments. It was quite some time since I wrote a poem and was inspired to do a couple. The next one will be a sonnet.
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Great poem to bring views in my mind of a day on the farm. I could almost smell bread baking and nature’s aromas as I read. Great picture of you sitting out among the beauty of nature. Hard work on the farm but I do miss those days. Hugs
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That is a very old photo as you can see from damage to the slide from which I took a digital image. We kids liked our farm experience, but then we enjoyed all our childhood experiences both country and town. 🙂
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Ian, I like your poetry — you convey simply with lovely imagery and place me in the past. Is that picture of you or your dad or a random shot?
Nice post!
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That’s me before the rock and roll era arrived Cindy. I graduated to army crew cuts, then long hair, a fad that went on through to 1985 when I went to Singapore where long hair and beards are not welcome. 🙂
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You are the one who has led an interesting life!
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Happy 2017.
Good posts, beautiful blog.
Congratulations.
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Thank you for visiting. I enjoyed checking out your page.
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You’r welcome 🍁 🍁 🍁
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Indeed another day on the land – picture and poem at peace! NICE
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Yes rural life is peaceful, but sometimes Mother Nature is not kind to rural dwellers
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Great poem and story told, Ian! I can only imagine the hard work involved, and your words and style depicted the farm life very well.
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Small property holdings are uneconomical the way it was done back then in the 1940 to 1950s. The future lies with very large properties with a large capital base and automation.
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Thanks for your visit and comment Eric. I drew on the few years we spent on multiple farms when my Dad was trading his way out of a financial black hole. He learned that farming had no wealth building to it during that era, but stocking, planting crops, fencing then selling was a profitable business. It’s not an easy life. We kids liked it but were unaware of the hardships our parents suffered financially during the initial drought years on a farm. They insulated us from those hardships and we enjoyed our childhood as a result. Our home was a place of nurture and support. I’m sitting here on a farm nor far from where we live which my Father looked at as a prospective buy. Had he done so those hills now covered in houses looking toward the sea would have yielded him the life of a multi millionaire. But who can see the future clearly? 🙂
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I love this, Ian – an enchanting rhyme that captures the morning rise. A hard, harsh but fulfilling life – and for most of us – of times gone by.
“School bus standing by the shed
Awakened from its evening bed”
Nice approach – a unique POV, as were the opening lines of the tractor.
All good wishes,
Eric
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